Who am I
Deep inside
Where nobody sees,
Where it’s raw and real
And unconcealed,
More than what I’ve
Done,
Won,
Accomplished?
Deep inside…
Where the dancer dreams
And the child sings,
And the music plays
And the world fades…
Effortless,
Fluid,
Free.
Where façades fall
And veneers peel,
Manufactured,
Plastic and
Cheap,
Where identity hides
And lost dreams lie
In unswept corners
With bubbles and
Shovels and pails,
Forgotten.
Till the dust shakes
And the heart quakes
And memories stir awake…
And s l o w l y
We rise from the
Rubble of self
Naked and raw
And real,
Silent and small
In the empty space,
Void of our made-up face,
Sensing His Presence
Like on-coming rain,
Drinking His scent in deep,
Grace-rain falling,
Splashing in drops,
Fat and gentle
And sweet.
Through the pouring rain,
A whispered name,
Branding my soul,
With His ink,
Harmony swelling,
Melody welling,
Thundering rhythm deep,
Parched heart filling,
Beating, spilling
Drawing me into the
Beat
Beat
Beat
Heartbeat of the King,
Sanctified,
Holy,
F R E E !
*Freedom’s Dance is part of the Christian Writers July Blog Chain on the topic “Freedom.” Click the links in the sidebar to the right for more inspiring posts, and may your heart be blessed.
As always your words are beautiful and enthralling.
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Oh, Debra, thank you!
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I love the photos, and the words. Beautiful imagery again – heartbeat of the King. I love it.
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Thank you, Cecilia! Praying for you today. 🙂
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Gorgeous, melodic, rhythmic poem, Cindee! The photos are beautiful as always, but your words swept me up in the dance. Brilliantly done!
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Thank you, Traci! What an inspiring comment! I so appreciate it!
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Wow Cindee! Branding my soul with His ink? What a perfect line. I’d always thought of him putting a big cross on my forehead, but the cross really is in my heart. Thank you for this beautiful poem and all the gorgeousness it contains.
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Carol, you and Cindee sparked a poem; thanks for the inspiration!
Cross My Heart
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Carol, thank you! What a blessing that your comment and my poem sparked a poem for Traci! Blessings!
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A beautiful word picture of our Savior’s love. Thanks again Cindy
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Great verses and images…well done!
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Thanks, Michael!
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Thank you Cindee, I want His heart to beat within me 🙂
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Thanks, Chris! That is my heart’s desire too! 🙂
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Great post as usual. I liked the imagery and pacing. Peacea nd Blessings
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Thank you, Edward. Grace and peace!
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These verses are so wonderful and so poignant…
Grace-rain falling,
Splashing in drops,
Fat and gentle
And sweet.
Of course, I liked the rest of them as well.
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Thank you, Chris! Blessings to you!
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{{{sigh}}} The sweet-honey of your words spills over my heart and soothes my soul with such beauty! I so love reading all that you write. You are gifted and talented!
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Lynn, your words were honey to my heart, dripping sweet and deep! Thank you! Loved your comment! Love You!
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Wow! I have never been a poem-person. However, I might be now. You really drew me in on that one. I was lost somewhere and you keep me on track with a constant beat, beat, beat in the background. Wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing.
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You’re welcome, Chris, and thank you for such a sweet comment. Blessings!
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Cindee- Amazing wordsmithing!! Before the master’s hand we are but self images of the world around us ” Manufactured, Plastic and cheap” then with a stoke of his grace “Grace-rain falling, Splashing in drops, Fat and gentle And sweet.” Loved it! we are transformed! Rain on Me!!! Rain on Me!! I love those fat gentle refreshing drops!!
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Thank you, Terrie! May we all be drenched in grace drops, “fat and gentle and sweet.” 🙂
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your images and words flow in gentle rhythm …
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Thank you, Susan!
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You sure have a way with words Cindee. These words spoke to me. Bring on the grace rain.
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Thank you, Adam! I agree, “Bring on the grace rain!” Love the way you said that!
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Lovely *sniff*
You really grabbed me with the first stanza, as it represented me (and still sometimes does) to a ‘T’
I hope you receive national acclaim for your poems some day, Cindee. They are POIGNANT
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Oh, Nona! What a blessing your words are! Some days I dream of being published. Others I’m simply content to write the words God lays on my heart and let Him use them as He will, content to quietly rest in Him. But I do wonder sometimes where this journey will lead. 🙂
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“Raw and real and unconcealed. . . .”
You’re s’dang good with words, Cindee. You’re a blessing to us all. I’ve never been one to promote jealousy of another’s spiritual gifts—but man, would I love to be able to do what you do. . . !
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Wow! Your words just made me grin, Scott. It’s been an amazing journey to be part of the CW Blog Chain, stretching me out of my comfort zone. What a blessing to be adventuring this path with so many inspiring and beautiful hearts for God!
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